vik at diamondage.co.nz
Mon Aug 16 00:28:01 UTC 2010
On 16/08/10 12:13, Nevyn wrote:
> The changes are - I've removed the second "to" in the first sentence,
> added the word "congregating" to emphasise the fact that it's a
> physical thing, added "technical" to the pursuits and added "and
> knowledge" to the sharing of skills.
Is it worth tacking something like "both traditional and modern" on
there, WRT the skills part? Or is brevity better?
More information about the Discussion